This was lovely! It was nice to see the theme of Rodney's own enzyme experiences, which wasn't explored in the show. You've captioned Lorne's reaction perfectly here, concerned with a hint of awkwardness, but fundimentally willing to make the effort and be a team player. :)
I loved this piece of description - He reached out and caught the little pile of bubbles on McKay's shoulder right before they slid off. The bubbles felt cool and light in his hand. He wiped them off against his hip and turned to leave.
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Date: 2008-08-21 04:56 pm (UTC)I loved this piece of description - He reached out and caught the little pile of bubbles on McKay's shoulder right before they slid off. The bubbles felt cool and light in his hand. He wiped them off against his hip and turned to leave.